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by Alex T.
Danny’s mom
passes Danny’s room on her way to her own room
and hears weird noises coming from inside and decides to investigate.
She opens
the door to see her son writing frivolously at his desk making sounds
of
frustration.
“Danny honey, what’s wrong?”, she asks
concerned for her
son.
“Nothing”, he responds trying to get her away.
“Why were you making those noises?”, prying to
get to the
bottom of the problem.
“No reason”, trying to shield the problem from
her.
“No, now Danny I want to know why you were making
those
noises and I’m not leaving until you tell me!”, frustrated
at Danny’s lack of
response.
“I told you there wasn’t a problem!”,
practically crying,
“Now can’t you just leave me alone!?”
“Actually no I can’t, because something’s
wrong and you
won’t tell me, and I feel that it is my job as a parent to make
sure you’re
okay”, calmer, seeing the pain her son is going through,
“so it would make my
job a whole lot easier if you could just calm down and tell me what was
bothering
you.”
“CALM DOWN!? Calm down? You think that I can just
instantly
calm down because it would make your job easier?”, almost
hysterical, “Well let
me just tell you that it isn’t my job to make your job easier.
And frankly
right now if you would just leave me alone then we wouldn’t have
to worry about
our jobs and life would go on.”
“Don’t you dare tell me what to do young man! I
am going to
keep asking you questions until I am satisfied with the answer you give
me!”,
he has obviously struck a nerve.
“That’s just the problem mom! Satisfying you!
That’s what
everything is always about! Not you worrying about me, but me
satisfying you!”,
obviously enraged at his mother’s switch of attention from his
problem to hers.
“…”, shaking her head, trying to refrain
from yelling
anymore, “let’s go back to why I’m here in the first
place, what is wrong?”
Danny realizes his position and decides to tell his mom
what
is bothering him, “Well you know that writing contest you signed
me up for?”
“Yes honey, why?”
“Well I decided that today I would start to try and
write it
so I would have time to go over it and make sure it was perfect and
stuff.”
“Well good for you, I’m glad you’ve taken
that attitude
towards this.”
“Yeah well so the first thing I decided to do was to
come up
with an idea for it.”
“Right, that seems like the right thing to do. So how
far
are you now?”
“Right where I started, trying to find something to
write
about. I’ve tried to think of something and I’ve come up
with some ideas but
none of them work.”
“What do you mean “work”?”
“Well, the ideas either couldn’t last for the
length needed
or they were just stupid.”
“What did you think of so far? Let
me see.”
Danny hands her a blank sheet of paper.
“So, where are your ideas?”
Danny looks as if he is about to cry again and wipes his
eyes.
His mom recognizes that he has no ideas and tries to hold
back her frustration for his lack of success. “Well that’s
okay, honey, it’s
hard to come up with ideas on the spot.”
“What do you mean “on the spot”?”
“Well, most of the time it’s easier for a
writer to have the
ideas come to him or to be inspired by something that he sees or has
gone
through.”
“Like when grandma died or something?”
Nervous, “Well yes, but let’s try something
more…happy?”
“Oh,
okay, like when my football team won last week?”
“Yes,
that’s on the right track, but maybe something more
poetic.”
Danny
is confused as to why his win in football isn’t good
enough and continues to question, “Well, a football game win can
be poetic if
you write it poetic.”
Danny’s
mom really doesn’t like the idea about writing about
football so she suggests something else, “How about your last
birthday party I
threw you? Remember you had so much fun with all of your friends?”
“No,
not really, but I do remember how much fun I had with
my friends during the game last week.”
“You know what? Okay
fine. You go ahead and write about your stupid football game and see
where that
gets you”, she leaves the room in a hurry and leaves Danny
confused as to what
he did wrong.
“Well,
okay, something that happened in real life. Something
inspiring. Okay, I got it.”
Danny turns back to his
desk and writes on a new sheet of
paper after throwing his old one away. He completely loses track of
time and
writes into the night; fortunately it is Saturday and tomorrow he can
sleep
late. He becomes sleepy but doesn’t want to upset his mom by
leaving the lights
on so he makes his way towards the switch on his wall. The attempt is
useless
as he falls onto his bed and doesn’t quite make it.
Later that night Danny’s mom is getting ready to go to bed
but sees Danny’s lights still on and decides to check in on him
and apologize.
She opens the door but he is asleep and after sighing for his
carelessness goes
to turn of his lights. She goes over to his desk and sees his paper
there and
decides to read the first page or so to find flaws in it. However, she
is stopped
when she reads the title, “Perfection or Death”. She places
the paper down and
runs out as she had done just earlier that day, leaving the lights on.
